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by Shanastay

person Alex
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay c'mon hun! give us a new years present! haha poor Legolas she's torturing him lol
person Ladysire
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Can not wait for more
person Kate
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD PLEASE REVIEW ASAP!
person Kage Miko
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update
person Ellemire
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More More More More More More More
More More More More More More More !
person uhhh.... I have no name
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa whoa whohanahanastay, I think you may be taking some of the reviews TOO seriously. Everyone loves your story and is begging you to update it! I've seen nothing but "good good good" and "update update update" in everyone's review. I personally love this story and just read it a third time. Don't let it die. About the whole piercing thing, I could have sworn you wrote somewhere that Legolas felt a tongue piercing, but I guess I was wrong. sorry. I thought the belly piercing was a good idea (the dragon was cute!) and it definitely adds to a wild girl scenario (which again is cute). people were just being honest, I was just being honest, don't let it get to you that much. if you want to continue writing that way, that's fine, I'll still read it, I was just doing what you asked, reviewing. again, sorry if I upset you, and I want you to continue. so again, let me say, update!
person Calenhisiel Greenleaf
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*this is me FINALLY leaving a review*
i saw this fic sometime ago, and i said "what the heck! one more fic wouldnt hurt". (i havent read any new ones in a while). i saw this one, and it was REALLY good.
there's the whole fantastical element (i know i wished that was me) but i also like the chemisrty between them. makes it more... special.
can't wait for more!
person EresseaKu
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! It is so well writen!! I love it!! MORE! Please :D
person Manders1953
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This goes for this story and all your other ones...wow...just wow...
person Goofball
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, just for that scene, you should make Legolas like... because you said on Janessa's POV that his length was throbbing, you should actually have him in pain. I don't know why, but that's make it interesting.
I'm all for Legolas torment, whether good *wink wink* or bad.
Anyway, this is good, I can tell that you enjoy writing this.