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by Shanastay

person savetheducks
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh come on! put up more!
person darkhumor
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, I think you know what i'm after... another chappie! Now, don't make end end my army of chipmunks after you, because they will force you to update, and I'm sure it's hard to fantasize with several hundren chipmunks holding spears to your back...
person dandylion345
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so do we get another update days later this time for reviewing? it relle is an interesting story. i like how you tell it from legoals's view and then her view. it works relle well.
person Zahatorte
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've got one heck of a touch! No pun intended, sounds like the arrogant Legolas is getting what he deserves, i like it, i like it a lot. Please continue, i'm curious what your character is plotting next and how Legolas will retaliate.
Peace,
Zahatorte
person Ellemire
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
C'mon, you know we want more! I like the way you tell it from both points of view- it prolongs the sweet torture. ;) Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update! I want to know what happends.
person gabriellagreenleaf
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more
person Brenda
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, why do I have a feeling that you also enjoyed writing the smacking of Legolas's ass?!! Hum...wonder what you'll do in the next chapter. Especially now that Janessa wants her turn back, since Legolas, shall we say, kind of stole it from her for the moment. :) oh and love how you do the \/Review\/ lol though what is the B for after? *wonders...* well you better update...no school to stop ya...lol
Brenda
person Lady Undomiel
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHO! *That* was INTERESTING! Wow...*starts to daydream* Can't wait for the next chappie! Hope it comes soon.
*~Lady Undomiel~*
person Ellemire
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more more more more!!
person Alex
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw! I love that! (and good thing, I dont mind Mary-sues cause I do it all the time without realizing it) It shows how cute and adorable and playful Legolas can be! Unlike all the other stupid "I'm a prince of Mirkwood and am serious beyond belief" fanfics. Great job on keeping Legolas's character correctme pme people cant be Legolas to save their lives.