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very very good! :)
I want more!

more! give us more! its so good cant wait till you update again

*claps*
i luved it
keep writing!
-niki :)

Hmm...the only thing that rubs on me the wrong way - just a tad mind you - was all the piercings she had. In general it doesn't bother me, but I hope we don't come to find that she has any studs...shall we say...below the bikini line. :) You almost made me feel sorry for Leggy in this chapter. ;)
-Ging

beyond wonderful

How did you know that dom/sub was my weakness?
Haha. Well done once again.
I always write to tell you how much I'm loving this... it continues to be true.
Keep these wonderful chapters coming, you literary Goddess.
~ Elerrina Rose

Yep, this is the author again. Seems people are being misleading in their reviews again.
First my fic gets called slash when ithet het (heterosexual), now someone said she has too many piercings and probably has one down south? I'm sorry, but wtf? She has 1, count it, one (1) piercing namely a belly ring which is extremely common nowadays.
If you have problems with piercings period why would you be reading a fic of this nature anyway? One of my other characters (in another story) has several piercings, but that is completely separate from this one.
I was trying for an evey buy but slightly wild kind of girl that could be identified with. Clearly I am not succeeding if I am receiving comments like this. Or maybe the writers are purposely being misleading. I get no response to e-mails so I don't know.
I take criticisms seriously. I don't just blow them off like some may. I would like to think I have a talent with words (so I've been told) but I would like to improve. Thus I take reviews seriously and to heart and some have given me nice backhands to the face. I'm not looking for sunshine and roses, just true, honest feedback that isn't clearly wrong and misleading.
I honestly am not sure if I will write any more of this fic if this is the kind of response I will receive. This one has been primarily written for reader enjoyment. I have other fics I can and will spend time on.
Should I continue or let this one die? You're the reader. You tell me.

Hey. You said earlier that someone had called this smut. That may be the official fanfic word for it, but in my opinion that word is degrading. Your fic is fkn great, and you obviously have talent. Please ignore any retards who use that word in reference to this fic, and be prthatthat it's an original and interesting piece. keep on with it.
Aira.

Hi, it's me again.
I, as I'm sure you've noticed, am rather outspoken. Well, here it goes. The following is addressed to the fanfic reading public:
What ever happened to the common sense of "if you don't like it, don't read it" ? Please tell me. There are people all over the world with varying cultures and preferences. Not all citizens of this earth share your ideals and concepts of beauty.
I, myself, am a proud, strong, corporate woman with 3 tattoos and 2 piercings.
Many people of this persuasion do it as a personal expression, not to be viewed by the general public. This fic involves a highly personal encounter, therefore private things WILL be visible.
Your opinions are respected, but, I hope, would fall short of discouraging this author's creativity and expression.
Every character, no matter how different, is an expression of herself either emotionally or instictually. Please feel free to ignore the aspects you do not agree with.
We are all here to enjoy. And I hope that you fully appreciate the creative gift this author has given usctfuctfullness is a virtue.
Had to put in my two cents.
Can't wait for the next chapter... oh, I better bust out a glass of wine, I feel things heating up :)
Your devoted TATTOOED & PEIRCED fan,
~ Elerrina Rose

omg. thats was so...great, powerful, sexy, fascinating...omg...i about died. lol. please keep updates. i also love how for each 'scene' you do a point of veiw for each legolas and the fiery goddes. that is awesome. oh god this was electrifing. not smut,not smut.
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