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*smirks* Ah, how cruel the Valar can be. ;) They don't often listen to any prayers to put an end to pleasure. =P *licks lips* More please.
=) Abbie

Pester pester pester pester pester pester pester pester!! More, I ask of you! There's only one thing I don't really like- all the piercings on your "firey goddess" It's a little gross. :p But the rest is perfect, keep it up!

that was pretty funnying ing it from his point of view, I couldn't stop laughing, especially when he was "asking for help." How many piercings does she have though? I don't think that my man Legolas goes for that type of girl... of course not! he goes for me! muh ha ha ha ha... keep up the good work and update soon!

lol..almoalmost makes you feel sorry for him...almost...still..i wonder if that really works..:D loving it soo much. can't wait for more!!

Love it, can't wait for the next chapter! Go...go and get back to writing!

^_^ You make me happy. Thanks for the great visuals...

legs getting spanked. that defenatly draws some interesting images. good story thing keep going

Damn. Not only are you a good writer, you... ah, no, it would censor that. Damn it. Just write more, ok? Trust me, I am sure I am not the only one who enjoys this more than you think. Although I truly wonder about the rating, ah well. And yet you still keep this elvish in all you're writing... you are truly amazing. If I could keep my nerve and thought through writing this I could certainly not keep details from JRRT's books (and other such places) in mind. WRITE MORE! Now off to read something more innocent *smiles an obviously fake innocent smile*

jesus fucking christ you have to finish that! omg you HAVE to! its the besfic fic ive ever read! holy shit! please email me when the next chapter is up! whoa

OMG I love it! More! A thousand times, more!