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by Shanastay

person dandylion345
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn your good at writing sex scenes! don't stop... this is good stuff.
person ginger flower
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pestering? You want pestering?!?
Well, I never was one for annoying people.
I shall have to resort to begging. And offering cookies.
*pst* They've got m&ms in em! (or peanut butter or chocolate chip, w.e the authoress likes!) ^_^
-Ging
person Crystalline4
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo! this is an amazingly tantalzing piece of , shall we say, smuttiness? And I love it! especially the first person point of view, which alternates each chapter. Lovely work. so do write some more!...please? p.s. I am now a devoted fan as well..
person Ellemire
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating! My world makes sense again. Did I pester you enough? LOL. Woo hoo, I really like the new chapter. I THOUGHT it was my turn. ;) Can't wait for more.
person leggylover
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am SO there on the pestering.
lol
anywho, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
i luv this chapter and the point of view changing every chappie.
PLEASE!
(i loved the naughty elf part the most)
person hello
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good m...keep writing!
person manda
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!! i love it
keep it up
person Arianna
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice work!
I'm doing my best at pestering... will you consider updating now?
PLEASE?
person Babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think AFF.net is on crack or something. Anyways, bad elf! LMAO and more of that! "I saw that look, you liked it" LOL I loved that, especially later when Janessa is like, hey it's my turn. I think others will agree with me when they say they want more but I can wait patiently. ;) :)
Brenda
person Kitta-Boo
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins devilishly* Sexy...
--Abbie