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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yummy.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lordy, this was just awesome! I love the way you did the duality between charachters, I've read a few that don't give the technique justice, but this was lovely! And the fact that Legolas is so kick ass here, ugh, I LOVE the attitude you gave him. And the OC, she was brilliant. Kudos for this fic, I'm in love. Also loved the intense little descriptions, like the hands and muscles. They were so well written, and in such detail. Again, I loved it, excellent story!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleeaasee!! do a follow up! this one was great and the next will only get better i'm sure! You're one of the best writers on AFF!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have reviewed this before, and it is still so hot.....You are too naughty!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading Chapter 10.
Wonderful! Should you write a follow up?
YES PLEASE!
Wonderful! Should you write a follow up?
YES PLEASE!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've reviewed this on another board, so I figured I give my review here as well
Hottttt...I must say, my face kind of looked like this when I first read this story, but bye the end it looked more like this and this
Seriously, your detailed description of certain...uh...acts, was very impressive. You've done a wonderful job, and I REALLY REALLY hope that you decide to write a follow up.
Michelle
Hottttt...I must say, my face kind of looked like this when I first read this story, but bye the end it looked more like this and this
Seriously, your detailed description of certain...uh...acts, was very impressive. You've done a wonderful job, and I REALLY REALLY hope that you decide to write a follow up.
Michelle
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would pay to read this...Wonderful writing....A follow-up chapter?....hell yes....Love the detailed description.
Cecilia
Cecilia
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read it before and I'll read it again!
Oh, and follow up good idea!
Oh, and follow up good idea!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! you write teh naughty quite well!
keep it up!
and update tth!
mb77
keep it up!
and update tth!
mb77
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...God. THAT was incredible! -Reaches for pack of post coital
ciggies- I mean really, that was...wow. I must try this lastest little
trick out when he least expects it. -Licks tip of pencil and prepares to
copy notes- I totally suck at writing love scenes and you've managed to
write a whole, very well written, story about one long one! How do you
do it?? Very impressive. Very hot, very yum, and very impressive. More
please.
ciggies- I mean really, that was...wow. I must try this lastest little
trick out when he least expects it. -Licks tip of pencil and prepares to
copy notes- I totally suck at writing love scenes and you've managed to
write a whole, very well written, story about one long one! How do you
do it?? Very impressive. Very hot, very yum, and very impressive. More
please.