schedule
January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are really fucked up in the head! What's worng with you. Didn't get enough love as a child? God!!!!!!!! I HATE you
schedule
January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why did you do that.......(tears)...... you killed him.... I am so freaking confused...
schedule
January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just so you know that was not a flame. The story is beautiful but I am just so freaking confused....
schedule
December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a little disturbing. I'm currently opening and closing my mouth. Wow, other than the abrupt end, it was great. Went by a little too fast but what can I say?
schedule
November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise, I would have liked to have seen more to understand the motivation for Aragorn's actions. If you wanted to shock, you definitely got your wish!
schedule
November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not bad- but too sudden - you need more suspense--as in something else happening between the switching positions and the actual stabbing-- maybe Aragorn saying that Legolas is too beautiful - or some tease-- Aragorn saying that he saw soing ing that he shouldn't have- but that it won't affect their relationship-- etc..
and an explanation from Aragorn after the fact--as there was just a beginning and end but not enough middle and no reason to explain it all -- but good try
and an explanation from Aragorn after the fact--as there was just a beginning and end but not enough middle and no reason to explain it all -- but good try
schedule
November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well written but the ending was fairly random
schedule
November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well written but the ending was fairly random