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by HollyHobbit

person Tweeky Monkey
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this story for a while, and while the pretense may seem cheesy when explained, you pull it off very nicely. I like the fact that you try to keep the story believable and you do a bit of research before putting in something that coul of of question. I hope you keep up the good writing, and I'm looking forward to future chapters and stories.
person landosstar
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
damn... damn *has no words* that was amazing :D dude I wanna(be her! lol forking her, so damn lucky... lol awesome chapter, is there gonna be anymoe like this? ;) is she gonna tell him she's imortal? are they gonna stay together? *has a thousand questions* lol update soon!
person TheArcherAireur
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised to see there aren't more reveiws on your story because I find it quite exciting merely because of the sexual tension between the two main characters. You blend the two story lines of the highlander and middle earth so well that I found myself reading the whole story in a matter of an hour, I was hooked and enchanted by it. There's one point that hasn't been addressed though, the fact that Jordan is unaware that Legolas is immortal, and Legolas doesn't know that Jordan is immortal! Will you ue soe soon I'm looking forward to your next chapters. I'm not very good at writing reveiws, but, when I read something I like I try to encourage the writer to finish. Good luck!
I am as always TheArcherAireur
person emma
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
could you fix the repeated chapters?
the story is fantastic though, keep it up!
person LandosStar
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe thought might as well get an account here as well lol hmm this last chapter was hot :D I can't wait for the next one!
person Dakki
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, got ya e-mail. Always a pleasure to be able to review your story. Since you don't mine about me repeating this statement, I'll say it again in my every review. 'I LOVE IT!!!" Good, now we got that away. Lets start again.
I'm very interested in what Gregory is playing in this story. he seems to known more than he lets out. Very interesting indeed. Will definitely need to keep my eyes on him...
As for Jordon and Legolas...what can I say. They are cute! Poor Legolas, everytime when he's just about to achieve, something has to happen. I really feel sorry for him. Wish I can give him a hug (or something more...). Hopefully, he will have better luck this time.
Well, thats it girl! Hope your next chapter won't be long. Cia. ^_~
person Risika
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Why did you have to stop there! MORE!
person Chrissy
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! I really hope Legolas and Jordan get it together soon. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens at the end!
person Daisy Princess
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yippie! You're here!!! Cant wait for the continuing story... I'll keep checking back. I can't wait to read the next chapter! (Yummy Elf)
*~*~* Daisy
person dewey263
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I followed it on FF.net and was familiar with AFF.net, so finding your story was not hard. Write more!!!