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for Only One

by HollyHobbit

person TheBlackWitch
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, love the story but, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!!!
person Vi Janaway
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course I wondered how Methos knew Elvish I just knew you would tell us eventually
Details and descriptions and plots within plots so very well done
Still loving this story
person Vi Janaway
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow I simply love this story It is one of my favorites But you know that :) :) :) :)
It just gets better....But she ought to tell Legolas
I am sorry about your computer. It is hard, but we can wait
person Michelle
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger!!!!! Grrrrrr......Great story. You've done a great job writing this story. I must admit that, I actually read this in one sitting. Completely hooked, please update. I cant wait for the following chapter. Pleupdaupdate soon...
person carly
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it! but when will you write more?! *bounces* MORE!! PLEASE!!
person emma
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh finally all in the one place!
hehe cant wait to read more (hint hint)
person Mélusine
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fbgzbgrz.

Sorry, but it's the only thing I could find - every "Only One" chapter leaves me rather... hum, beatific. Hem.

I know I should review more often, but my acute bone idleness is so strong sometimes, that I have not the very courage to write the slightest bf cof compliment even to those I admire and love. Snirfle.

So I want you to know, in my poor English grammar and vocabulary (well, if only writers could speak French... I could be far more spiritual anilliilliant) how much I love you, your style and your story. I love Jordan, who-is-not-a-Mary-Sue (what in the hell have people with Mary Sues ? Me like Mary Sues ! It makes me laugh) and who is an original character, interestind ded deep, a fragile but no so fragile woman, who tends to do all erros we women do. Poor girl.
Sometimes I'm biting my nails (all your fault !) in front of my screen, muttering nonsense about Jordan being a stupid little indecisive girl - it generaendsends with shouting "tell him, you troll !" and my dog hurriedly jumps off my dad's favourite armchair, thinking I'm about to kick him off it. (do not fear for him, he's such a stubborn, dogged rat ! - not my dad, the dog)

I also love the way you introduce both the universes, melting stories and intricating worlds with each others. Crossovers have always been my favourite kind of fanfiction, but they are not so often good, well-constructed and they do not often bring suspense enough either. To me, you have succeeded in composing something coherent, interesting, moving and thoroughly intoxicating. Did I say I love you ?

Before you get scare of me, thinking I'm (er... that's not so wrong in fact) a hopeless fangirl who is going to chase you and spy on you until you put a final point to your wonderful story(ies)... let me tell you that :

Bravo, et merci !

Mélusine
(hopeless "romantique" and madly in love with Elvenkind)
person emel_raines
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Oh what a tangled web we weave...." Poor Jordan, Poor Legolas, Poor Methos..... and POOR JOE! Its great. I can't wait for more.
person becca
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Excellent work! I love this story. Please post soon!!!!
person emel_raines
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wicked.... when will MacLeod ever learn?.... sheesh. Mistaking a hobbit for an elf???? Boy that Santa and Keebler thing just really goes a bit too far sometimes.. Keep it up, I love this story.