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for Greenleaf & Imladris 7 - Forbidden Fruit

by MPB

person louise_oblique
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sirgon. very good fic and can't wait for more. yes can't wait for legolas's attraction to elonir, lol. fantastic

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louise
person Anita
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! This is just so sad, but I am glad Sirgon's passing was alleviated by Legolas.

*sigh*

You know, Elrohir is very good at hidding his feelings. Even when Legolas says he has a hard time believing he would ever lay with another male...a very impresive chapter!
person Aly
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... now you have me really wondering how El and El are going to be feeling after their little talk with Legolas. Their conversation doesn't give much hope for a romance between Legolas and Elrohir. Will this make Elladan back off of trying to push his brother to admit his feelings, maybe? You've really got me wanting more!

.... as for not putting down my e-mail, I just don't like to put it out there to much. but I am will to give it if specifically asked.
Aly
person Aly
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the horse must have fallen for Legolas' spell as well. ;) You have me anxious for Legolas' talk with Sirgon. That should be a very interesting (hehe) conversation. And it's not fair that they won't let Legolas compete in the Archery contests. If he wins every time, it should just force the others to want to become even better. *LOL*
I'm truely enjoying this series and hungrily await the next chapter!
person louise_oblique
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
got to catch bud but another great chapter. loved it
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louise
person Aly
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... so is this little plot twist going to help Elrohir to acknowledge his true feelings for Legolas? Or will this maybe bring feelings out in Legolas? I can't wait to see where you take this! I've loved this series so far and am looking forward to the rest of it!
person S
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, so like the jealousy factor here and want to see more of the budding romance between Elrohir and Legolas (though, if Elrohir wants to get jealous and give back, that's fine too). I am so excited by the update that I'm reviewing without actually reading all the way through (because too oft I download, read, then forget tor review), so forgive me if I've missed a plot point or more. I do know that, after reading thoroughly, I will want more, so please continue!
person janet
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This series is one of the best I've ever read. The progressing relationship is definitely taking form and I cannot wait until the next parts. :) Bravo on exceptional writing style, wonderful plot, excellent spelling, and good grammar.
person louise_oblique
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Brilliant! Perfect! Poinyant! unpade update update please. Great orgionaity and characterisations. Truly that was fantastic but yep there's gonna be trouble. I look forward to the next part. Take care

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louise
person Gilraen
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I totaly love your storries!! The friendship between the princes is soo good that I am scared that ifohirohir tries to get closer to Legolas then they already are, Legolas will get scared and discusted and it will be the end of it all... I beg you to post more as soon as you can!