rate_review Reviews

so beautiful... i read it while listening to nick cave's where the wild roses grow and it is so powerful. amzingly disturbing and just simply beautiful.
wonderful work!

Thanks a lot for the reviews. Um... Karen, is "words fail me" a good or a bad thing? *blushes*

words fail me.

thanks alot :)

yea well i am danish and Milly is German, so some slipups are bound to happen, and we did not have a beta for this - normally i get all my stuff betaed, but milly dont, and so we uploaded this not betaed.

ehm as a matter of fact she is Elladan, and i am Legolas LOL, i allways get the crappy roles :P

-Az

Wicked isn't the word for this one. I really enjoyed how this unfolded and the shocker twist at the end. I don't suppose you would want to write about this from Elrond's POV and maybe even Elrohir's as well. Your style of writing really lends itself to this. Not that I'm saying your perverse or anything but not everyone could carry this type of story off.
I am finding some really interesting writers with great AU POV's and then get to go rotheother things they have done. Hope you share lots more of your song lyric inspired tales with us.
Oh and tell Milly it is just make believe. All the elves are really in Aman having a great time partying till the wee hours of the morn and then waiting in reverie for the sun to come up and start all over again. giggle
PS the only problem I saw was spelling. It is tingling not tinkling. For me tinkling is when you pee. So I had a little jolt everytime I would read that word and have to re-read to see where you were going with your sentence. Just an FYI. It didn't take away from your great fic. giggle