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person Az
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA Ulan got what was comming his way :P

btw a super cute chap
person HHS
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are making my upcoming New Year really nice!Very nice indeed!WOOHOO!!!
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
finally got to read the two other chapters - and once more YAY - its so goddamn brilliant :) i'm gonna look forward to more
-Az
person Mawgy
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! So far a great opening to a new story (sequel). I'm glad to see you got it all worked out in the end.

Sorry, but I think Elladan and Elrohir's first attempt at getting back their dignity was lame. However, their second one was much better! Oh, poor Goel. Though, I think Elladan's gone a bit too far with the teasing. If I were Legolas I would have been mad with him when he said all those nasty things just after finishing with the horses.

Just one thing though. I though Leggy was to remain in Rivendall until his majority. If this is after 6 months of the previous story, then why is has he been away? And, when was he fighting along side Goel?

Also, where did you come up with the name 'Para'? Cos, that's the name of my CAT!!!! I got it out of Brian Froud's 'Good Faeries, Bad Faeries' book. Do you have that too? Or is it just a co-incidence?

Anyway, loving it so far.

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Can't wait to see what Leggy comes up with to get Elladan back(I've only read the first 2 chapters so far). Truly, I can't believe how uptight Ellladan is being. Surely Galadriel won't mind. Besides, I think it's obvious that even Gaiel iel herself has sex, how else would celebrian have been born?
person Mawgy
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!!!! I'm SO sorry, but I just realised, I've never read your first story! I had it mixed up with another where Leggy goes to Rivendell. Wooops. Sorry. Just ignore my previous comments and questions (well, except for the ones that told how good your fic is, 'cos that's true, but all my questions, forget about them 'cos I'm sure they make sense to your story, I was just meaning with the one I read they made no sense. Oh, except for the name Para, I'm still curious about that). Anyway, sorry again.

Luv Mawgy
person HHS
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Makail!Wait,Dace is going to propose to Talaise?SWEET!!!
person louise_oblique
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. update update ;) loved it! very humerous :) a definate fave

huggs
louise
person HHS
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how things will progress with Thranduil and Elrond renewing their friendship and maybe something more.What trouble?ARGH!!!
person Aly
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why didn't Elladan tell Legolas that he had told Haldir, Rumil, and Orophin that they were to be wed? Seems like he could have eased a fear by telling him that, of course, the it could have come out that he'd had to tell because of his argument with Orophin. Oh well. :)
Keep up the writing. I can't wait for the contests in Rivendell!
person Vuaryn
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back girl!!!
I've missed you so much and I'm thrilled to see your fiction up in the website again.
That was a great start to the sequel. I just can't wait for Legolas to meet up with Elladan again. Well the twins, deserved their punishments, this should make them think again, before acting like kids. Keep up the excellent work. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

Again, welcome back!!!!