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Jesus Christ! You really know how to put suspense into play! o_o That last line that Elrohir stated before the chapter closed made my eyes widen, I keep thinking '..huh?? Die?? *wail*'. You do these things to me, heehee. And wow, such a great chapter, this was WELL worth the wait! The length was amazing, and even more so was the content, you really are so talented at writing! You manage to put descrip int into this fic that really gives me a mental image of the surroundings. From the descriptions you gave of the inner part of Gaidon, I was able to conjure up a visual easily, which really added to the story ^_^
Also, the first section with Thranduil being a little crude when discussing Glorfindel and Haldir made me smile; I never knew he could be that dirty *grin* That little bit of character added humour to the chapter which was a pleasure to read. Glorfy's blushing gave me a really cute image ^.^ I'm still rooting for Haldir and Glorfy to get together, all the way baby! =D
Towards the end of the Gaidon section was intriguing, with the twins being mistaken again for gods. Poor guys don't know what to make of it, eh? Heehee!
Wow, loved this chapter, every bit of it. So much seems to happen within each update, and I'm always checking back with anticipation to see if you've updated! Yeah, I'm that eager to read the next installment! ^_^ Your writing is just so enchanting that you've hooked me. Keep up all the fantastic work, and here's to hoping you update soon with another rapt and exciting chapter!

Please continue. I can't wait to find out what happens. What is Elly hiding from Legolas?! Must know! Wonderful stories btw. ^_~

hurra! this iokinoking SO good, i cant wait to find out what will happen next :)

So something "tragic" happened that invo thi this Henna?Now why did it cause the break-up of Elrohir and Ellaria?And since Haldir knows something,he doesn't want to talk about it either.Wait,does Elrond have any clue as to what happened?I think that Elladan should at least tell Legolas part of what happened.

I'm ashamed to say that I've been reading this fic since Library of Moria, and only just finally got around to reviewing it on here. And yet I find that when I come to it, there aren't a lot of words I can use to describe this fic, and the one before it, because I'm so in awe of them. A beautiful pairing; Legolas/Elladan, a riveting storyline, and your fantastic and rapt writing make it all such pleasurable writing to read. At points during Mending a Broken Heart, I found myself biting my lip in anticipation and leaning forward in my seat, and likewise, I am seeing myself do the same now with the sequel. Your writing is just so enthralling that these fics are becoming my favourites, and my favourites are some prettyd fid fics to beat ^_^ Shows how good you are, which may I say, is very, very good. I always look forward to your writing and for your next updates, I've re-read Mending a Broken Heart many a time over waiting for you to update this, and find I will never get bored of it. Your work is fantastic, on a whole different level, and I hope that you will continue to keep up the same great level of suspense, romance, and intriguing storyline. Thanks for writing such great pieces!

hmm a little late here :P but its a super good chappy, and damn a cliffy you got there *hrmf* hahahha i hope to read next chapter soon

hugs Az

Very very cool :) please continue

huggs
louise

YAY - that was good, poor frustrated Elladan LOL. :)

gonna look forweard to more

well i can just say that i love it! i love it more than any other ff i ve ever read

Something tells me that Elrohir and Ellaria's relationship is in trouble.