rate_review Reviews

oh yay! that was SUCH an amazing chapter! wow you just saved my weekend :)

Did I wrote bad cliffhanger? Sorry, I meant EVIL, because I think you like to torture the readers with it. Don´t you?

GREAT new chapter (and a very bad cliffhanger) Please continue soon!!! PLEASE!

Wow! Such a turn for the books! O_O That last paragraph had my eyes widening, I've never seen Elladan so scary! I'm really anxious to see what the hell is going on, because it's giving me the jitters, eheh ^^;; Crikey, this chapter had a lot of feeling in it, and it was great to read, apart from the obvious uneasiness during certain parts *cackles evilly* That was just excellent. I really liked the demonic twist to things at the end of the chapter, as opposed to all the pleasure that it had been about. (which, by the way, was very, very, veeeery hot *sizzles* Hehehe!). I'm just hoping that the whole Elladan-Beast thing is some sort of dream or something o_o Otherwise, I'd be afraid XD *cue spooky music*
Welleat eat update! This fic seems to be getting more and more suspense filled everytime I read! And still waiting for that all important Glorfindel/Haldir turn *giggles* Hope that comes about! *__*! Hehe, but fabulous work my friend, keep it up! 'Cos I'll keep reading! ^_^

That was only a dream right?

Sorry i dont want to be rude but i hate the end of the chapter. i don't know what is going to follow but i have honestly to say that your story is not going better with each chapter.

dont missunderstand me, i loved mending a heart, it is my favorite story! i cannot tell you how much ie ite it! but now, i thing you should have stopped with the first part, for you are disenchanting your own story. your style to write was nearly like tolkien himselve but now i isn't any longer. sorry english is not my native language and i would like to explainbetter what i mean, but i cant. maybe you want to write back, you have my address, so feel free to do it, i wold like to talk to you. i know how hard it is to write a chapter and than comes a stupid bad speaking girl and tried to tell you, she hates it. it's just my oppinion, and because of curiosity i'll read the following chapters, but im sad that it goes this way with your story!

take care of you luthi

I really love your work! Now I am longing for the next chapters! Please I can't bear it any longer! Help me and give us more, please!

no. you ended that there...i have this sick feeling in my stomach. great story. i dont want it to end with legolas losing ellaran. in fact i think you should end it right there. this story can only end in pain. and i dont want to be sad.

great grammar and spelling. i have extreme happiness towards your beta. if you have no beta i simply bow before you.
i like the story line. its clear and the twists are not confusing and unreal. scary as it may seem, i could understand the twists after reading them.
the characters all stick to one personality. there are no changes in the persons that are not simply a different emotion or caused by something.
i like the h and g idea. i have trouble with names so i will leave it up to you to know who i mean. haldir and g (ancient guy, knows about the moon evidently).
you havent babbled and repeated yourself. i actually enjoyed the enceence structure, which means that you have imagination (not that i couldnt alread guess that).

thank you for this wonderful read. i think i want you to continue, but i really dont want to see legolas lose another. i just couldnt.

respectfully,
ashley

YAY, goodie a new chappy... but you did leave with quite the cliffie there..

and me confused, i think i need to reread or something, cuz i cant remember a orc.. :/

After all that Elladan/Legolas have been through,why can't Elladan trust Legolas on what happened after Legolas left Rivendell?It must be something really tragic or else El;rohir will still be engaged to Ellaria.