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How sad for Haldir - he needs love too!!! Pe wre write a happy ending for him.

how sad for Haldir - might there be any more to this story?

wow that was really wonderful. do you plan on making a s a seires cause i know you could pull it off. this chapter is the perfect beng ang and you should be proud of it. though poor halidir feeling unloved and lost at the moment. i hope you do turn this into a series cause i would love to see where it is that you will take this . good luck and best wishes
Jaimi

wow is all that i can really say your story was very heart felt and moving. i do hop that you turn this into a series cause there is so much that should and could be expa. i . i mean if was was hte first chapter in a seires then you would have made a wonderful stop. already mak make us feel happy for halidir brothers to have found love but at eh same time you just made was worry about halidir himself and his "abandiment". so now we ask will he confront his brothers?, will he join them ? will he go back to his lover? what will happen if he choosess any of these ? see there is so much you can expand on and really draw us into your world with and i do hope tht you tend to make this a series.
sincerely, Jaimi