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Even if the elf is a nut case he is still a bad elf and deserves whatevergetsgets. Scaring a poor little girl that way. Well anyway it is now Legolas and Thranduil to the rescue. And they better hurry up too. giggle

As much as I want to read the next chapters,
please don't over work & tire yourself. In the mean
time, get well while I wonder what will happen next.

Hi, just wanna say great fic can't wait for another update, please update soon, see ya

scary! good with l and t though. looking forward to next chapter. hope that you are feeling better. asmha is so so annoying. had it as a kid. my mum and brother have it really serverly though so i can commiserate


huggs
louise

This is good chapter, please update soon.

I stil love what I read.

Sivan

I am so sorry that you have been ill. I have gotten caught up on a lot of fanfiction because my entire family has that lousy flu and I have complete control of the computer. They prefer stupid TV. HA.
We even had flu shots but they don't work against this kind. I hope you didn't/don't get this because with your asthma it would be a nightmare.
Glad you are better now and you feel up to writing and posting. I look forward to reading. L in a fatherly mode is very fun. giggle

I most definitely want you to continue this story. But I would rather you be in good health first. I also have asthma and I know you need your rest. Health first, then story.
Take C
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Teri :):):)

OOh! Bad person, elf, whatever. Slap him silly and then coat him with tar, feather him and run him out of town, the woods, something.
Poor T, and poor L who is going to learn something about his family very soon that will be a big shock.
I like the long lost family secret plot. So much anquish and I am into that pretty seriously.
Can't wait for the bad guy to get his. I prefer a long drawn out chase, lots of gritty dialogue, much angst and then having nature in one of its many forms, spiders, orcs, lightning, falling into a raging river, well you get the drift coming down on the bad guy to illustrate even nature and the divine is out to get the slimeball. I look forward to what you and other readers come up with.
I usually don't read this type of story about humans and elves but it was a slow day and I have come to like your rendering of T and L very much. I don't mind T being a little hot headed and not open to much persuasion but not mad as a hatter. Well usually, if he is mad as a hatter it has to be for a really good reason. And it is nice if the reason is finally explained.
Thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to more. giggle

Hi, love the story very good so far. When is the little girl going to grow up? hopefully soon. When's the next update? can't wait.

When is chapter 5 published, want 2 know wat happens 2 the little girl with the bad elf.