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As always, I am entranced by your writing. I read this story some time ago and it stuck with me, even though I unfortunately could not remember where I had read it or precisely remember the author's name. Then a very short time ago, you posted this on "Following the Fellowship" and after the first few paragraphgs, it all came back to me. I'm so glad I found this story again.
I have always loved Dominant Billy. To be sure there is a fair amount written about that characterization. I have to confess that your Sub Billy intrigues me too. He may be sub, he\ he's not weak and that is what works about this for me. Like you, I can easily see him and Sean together. The idea has been a part of my thoughts and fantasies for a while. Your writing has brought that to life so vividly, mere words cannot express my joy in having this story to read.
I also have to compliment you on how stamy your sex scenes are. They are a touch romantic, which works perfectly for this story, but so blisteringly hot, I can feel the heat pour out of my monitor.
Kudos to a job well done. I hope you continue to write. You have snagged a loyal fan in me.

Girl, you write the best fics! You can't ask for anything more in a story. You have scheming, lust, love, great sex, and a bit of betrayal. I enjoyed reading every word..and every sex scene. ;oD The phone sex was just brillliant. If I were Billy, and Sean were doing me, I don't think I'd even be able to utter a single word. I could just imagine Dom snickering, while Billy is losing control. I loved how you had their best mates watch out for them. Sean had Vig and Billy had Dom. We all should have friends like them. I can't wait to read your next fic. HURRY UP!!!!! Just kidding. lmfao.

Wow, it's really hard for me to give you advice on "your" fiction. It's hard to give advice on whether to make the story a continuation of "Chained Lightning" ir give it a completely new title. Since it appears that your intentions are to introduce a female character into the mix, in essence making it a threesome, makes it doubly hard. You could either make it a totally different story, or use some type of clever wording in the exsisting title to convey the fact that there is now a female in the mix. An idea that has real appeal for me personally. Since it's RPS, I hope you might consider either making the female character either Liv Tyler or Mirando Odo. The disicion between the two is a really tough one for me to make, since I find them both extremely sexy, albeit in different ways. Couldn't you just throw them both into the mix.? Maybe not at the same time, although that could prove interesting, bu, but at least have scenes where they are included by themselves. Nttertter which direction you decide to take, I'm sure it's going to be really hot, especially for those that are really into mix threesomes and moresomes. Title Idea: Chained Lightning II (Between The Sheets) or somesuch as that. Just an idea, you could probably come up with a better one..Beornomir

Hi again Ghost! I know that I've already submited a review for this story, but I felt that I had to give you an update. As I told you I could hardly wait to reaad this over the weekend with my boy friend Mike. He agree that it was extremely well written but I don't believe that he really got into any of it other than the hot seBrotBrother did it get hot! We had to replace the computer chair with a recliner in yoou know what I mean. It was one of the wildest Sat. nites I've had in a long time and it is all thanks to you. I tell you more but I don't want to make anyone reading the reviews blush. LOL Did you get the e-mail I sent you? I didn't really expect a reply, just woould like to know it was received. Maybe you coould just posst something in the reviews that would let me know that I didn't write in vain. Keep up the good work. I've started reading you ohter story To capture the heart of a warrior. Not very far into it, but can already tell that it's going to be just as great as Chained Lightning. Again love the way you write .

This story is just so lovely and is beautifully written. The dialoge just flows and the character depiction is flawless. I wish is could put my thoughts and fantasies down on paper half so well. The story is great and then the sex just sizzles. The love between the characters nearly brought me to teas and then sex hit me right where I live. I can't wait to read this with my boyfriend this weekend. Now let me pick my panties up of the floor and try and dry the wet spot that;s on my computer chair.LOL!! s

Oh my God!!! As you might be able to tell from my name, I'm partial to Billy Boyd, and my second favorite is Sean Bean. I was in heaven when I found a story that has them both!!!! A wonderful tale, sexy and sweet.


Thanks!!
Mary-Anne

I am very sad that this is ending. I was so loving your story! Come back soon and write something else like this. Ever thought about a M/F fic? I would love to see Karl Urban and Mirando Otto together, written by you. *puppy eyes*

Sorry to say I don't like the new chapter. The story's been a interesting and fanciful sex romp with a few nods to BDSM, and suddenly there's a mouthy, improbable lesson about the do's-and-don'ts of online porn? It comes off as preachy and misguided. The rest of your workhas been interesting, but I think this section's a miss.

Gourmet slash indeed!

*SQUEALS IN DELIGHT* OMG THEY'RE GONNA GET MARRIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does the happy dance*....anyways u realize also that u made my ass hurt just thinking about the spanking....very arousing but never really want to experience it again thank u!

another awwwwww......for u mentioning my comment!!!!! i feel so nu!!!!!!!!!! *nubbed = loved btw*

u realize ur gonna have to continue this fic in a sequel or something.... I WILL NOT LET U LEAVE IT OFF!!!!!!!!! lol *demaning no?*

ok??? 't w't wait!!! *does the happy dance again* lol sugar!!!!!!!!!! lol wooooow need to calm down now.....i think i might need a spanking from sean....>:)))....wow i need to stop now, i've had too many m&m's....read ya later!

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