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for Amystika

by Aithilin

person HHS
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's really good that you're doing great so far.Now I'm wondering,in the "real" Legolas' world,were they together as a couple?
person giggle
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I got the dreaded go away can't answer the door right now page. I hope I can remember what I was saying. It is kind of late for me and I have the flu.
Loved going back to AU Middle Earth. Reading about ruined Imladris and the struggle to understand why L is there, alive. And now back to Mirkwood. More weird trees, animals and baddies. Maybe a flying Nazgul or two, some super orcs. Also Sauron was going to enslave men so we have that to look forward too. Of course this all depends on if you go with movieverse or bookverse. Anyway dwarves, more elves, lots of angst. And what about the other S, Saruman. Can't wait.
I hope all this writing is helping you out. Take care. giggle
person HHS
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haldir!In his world,they(him and Leggy)had something.I don't want Haldir to be lonely.Please?
person Vi Janaway
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really great It has a Twilight Zmystmystery quality
So many possibilities
Even with all the seriousness of the situation, you still manage to keep the characters true---in both planes of existence
I am sorry about your father
Vi
person giggle
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh those twins. In so many stories they are such pranksters. elv elves.
Well we have everyone all together now so they can start getting antsy. Think how different pre and pst ROTK things are. Here an elf can wander around with no thought of problems and just vanish and people will just wait around to get worried.
Yes I can't wait till we get back to the very AU. You have done a good job of describing a dark and fearsome place and as long as I don't have to be there I enjoy visiting in a story.
Maybe your writing can help you get through some of the stages of grief you will be going through. Just remember to be nice to yourself and reme goo good things. Don't dwell on what might have been or what you could have done differently or better. That is the way things were and this is the way things are now. No profit in rehashing the past except to learn from it or revel in the good. Be well. giggle
person giggle
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have tried to post countless times since I read your sad news but it just wouldn't go through.
My husband had a heart attack this summer and life hasn't been the same. I am grateful that with the proper care he is better and will probably be OK now. I wish the same could have happened for your father. Sometimes all the care in the world just isn't enough.
Please take all the time you need to grieve. It is a long and messy process but time does help one cope better with the shock and grief. Take care of yourself during this time to make sure you get all the emotional help you need.
I like your story so far very much and hope you feel you can eventually finish it. If not we understand. Since starting to read fanfic I notice lots of lovely stories that have been put on hiatus so this one won't be alone if you can't work on it anymore.
Bless you. giggle
person W
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ink tnk this is a really cool storyline, even though it must end tragically for one of the worlds, because Legolas will either be gone or dead in one of them. I do look forward to the slash relationship and all the angst that must come from it based on the two-world premise. Can't wait for the next installment!
person gwil
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry to hear about your father. My thoughts and prayers are with you.

The story is wonderful, as usual. I am so enthralled by the story line I can't wait to see where you take it.

Again, You have my deepest sympathies.
person HHS
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My condolences to you and your family.Take all the time that you need.
person giggle
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I like the first chapter. I like AU's if they make sense within their own set parameters. You know not just making it up as you go along and getting my poor brain all fried.
Yes slash would be nice but since it is AU how about some really weird combinations? After all the Dark Lord rideth, doesn't he?
Looking forward to more Thanks for your time and work. giggle