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by Aithilin

person giggle
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter # 7 (I hope)
OOH! Bad thick mist. It must be like the corpse candles in the Dark Marshes. Eerie and scary and dark. Except they have the power to hurt you. They had better not hurt Legolas too badly.
Poor Haldir. So Legolas wants to "know all about ~his~death". What a heartbreak for Haldir. Of course Haldir is going to have to eventually *tell all* and won't that be angsty. I look forward to this muchly.
Also the memorial to Thranduil's family (last chapter I just forgot to mention it). That was sad.
So the bird singing is considered an omen. Oh I forgot to mention the trials. So much good stuff. Too much to remember actually. You are really pouring it on. Yay!
You are great at imagining things and sharing with us. Looking forward to more posts. Thank you. giggle
person gwil
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, that's spooky! You have a great way with suspence. please update soon because I love this story and I'm dying to find out what happens next.
person Lairewen
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh nice fic! Stories like this have fascinated me since first coming across then in star trek! This story is utterly compelling and beautifully written! Plus Elrohir/Legolas is my favourite pairing!
More soon please!
person louise_oblique
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
epp cliffhanger ;) merry xmas and new year. very cool fic

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louise
person HHS
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He cannot die again!For the love of Valar!
person Rarity
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, we have the making of real angst here, with Haldir seeing a lost love become a new love for Elrohir (if you stick to your first thought of pairings). Plus, it seems that one of the worlds will have to lose Legolas either once or twice. *Sigh* I love it (as an angst fiend)! Don't suppose you could work in a nice angsty flashback, where we see Haldir holding Legolas as he dies in his arms? Aww, maybe I'm being greedy...but I want more, in any case!
person Aislynn Crowdaughter
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is very good, and very well written. So instead of forging a ring of power Sauron made himself a talisman to channel Morgoth... Your description of this other Middle Earth is very livid, and the interludes of "our" Middle Earth are well written as well. Will there be a new affair of Legolas and Haldir? Will Leglas manage to do the impossible and destroy the Dark Lords Talisman, thereby freeing this Middlöe Earth? Will he find back to his own world? I am eager to find out!

This is a great story! The only problem I have with it is that Aragorn and the others in "our" ME seems too passive for my taste; I would have thought that they would send someone to te places where Legolas had last been, trying to find out anything, instead of simply waiting if something turned up.

But meanwhile, I like this story very much!

Please go on!

Aislynn
person louise_oblique
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant fic, poor H. I admit you got me wondering if it will be L/H or L/E???!!! Love how you do L, oh also wondering if L in his own world has relationships with either. brilliant anyway, please continue.

also you have my sympathy, my aunt recently died and my dad is 62 and has ill health. so if yout tot to talk or anything?

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louise
person Nicole
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Sweetie!!!


Once again you continue to astound me! :-) I am so very much impressed over this entire story so far. I can't wait to see which way you are going to send my imagination next.

Hugs and happiness,
Nicole
P.S. More coming along shortly!!!!! ;-)
person gwil
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, as usual!
I have to agree with Celeborn; Legolas certainly is a gift from the Valar. (One that I certainly wouldn't mind recieving:)
Can't wait for the next chapter; please update soon!