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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely long post, thank you. More please!!!
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very well written; long not not boring), descriptive (but not to much), some nice original characters, an imaginable portrail of Greenwood, seems like you have taken your time writing it...all in all, a complete story so far. I saw that you have planned much more and I look forward to those story. Right now I believe this is one of the better fics here.
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, I love it :)
huggs
louise
huggs
louise
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was good to finally see some of the trouble the trio was causing. The sleeping drought was a great idea. *hehe* I'm really looking forward to the next installment of this tale. You have a great writing style. Very easy to read. Great story.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this first read of your tale. It has a lot of nice imaginative description. I also like nice happy families. Real ones though, what with Thranduil's two oldest sons not being perfect. Where is Arwen? Hasn't she been born yet?
I can see that L is going to get into a lot of trouble here because of those twins. I can't wait to see that. He will also be completely corrupted by them and that should be fun to read about also. I will enjoy reading the rest when you get it posted. giggle
I can see that L is going to get into a lot of trouble here because of those twins. I can't wait to see that. He will also be completely corrupted by them and that should be fun to read about also. I will enjoy reading the rest when you get it posted. giggle
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is fantastic!
I love the descriptions of Greenwood, it sounds lovely!
the interactions between everyone is written well too, I'm really looking forward to more and seeing where all this leads :)
please update soon!
I love the descriptions of Greenwood, it sounds lovely!
the interactions between everyone is written well too, I'm really looking forward to more and seeing where all this leads :)
please update soon!
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, yaa! he! he got trounced, faboulas!! :)
love the characterisations! legolas would make a so much better heir ;)
take care
louise
love the characterisations! legolas would make a so much better heir ;)
take care
louise
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start! I can't wait to read more. I've always loved the idea of friendships between Legolas and the twins. The descriptions of Greenwood are beautiful. I'd like to see a little more with the mothehoughough. How do they feel about the budding friendship between their sons and all the mischeif they'll get into. And just what is this mischeif? I know the twins are being very free with their attentions, but what have the three of them done? Examples would be wonderful!
Anxiously waiting for more!!
Anxiously waiting for more!!