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for Mending a Heart

by McKennaEspenshade

person balrog
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. I read the whole thing from the beginning and I love the way you place Elladan with Legolas. I cried when they were parted. You are very gifted to do this piece. I am now off the read Part 2. Thank you again.
person Roguish Smile
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* So wonderful. You had me rolling around in laughter at the teasing of Arwen (re: aragorn) and with Orcwen. I have never seen arwen portrayed so softly before, and it was lovely to see. It was a lovely story, and now i'm going hunting for more by you! :D
person liri
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! never ever read a better one!
person Shonee
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! I have no idea where the time has gone! One minute I was writing a review for...chapter nine, I think, and then I was reading...and reading...and READING...I completely forgot to write another review! ^_^;;

Back on track though. I really love your story as usual, and this time you seem to go more into the characters' feelings more than most authors I have seen around these day. So much so that I actually felt like I was hurting when Legolas mourned; was playful when Elladan jested, and was like "Where was I when THIS happened?!" when Elrohir finally got what was going on at the last moment.

I truely applaud what you have done for the LotR fandom.

Many thanks:
Shonee
person Shonee
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've read chapters one-four of your story and I loved it! I even told my little sister about some of the funny parts, and she was laughing right along with me.
person Shonee
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter six is the finniest yet! This is my sis's favorite as well. I hope to read more!
person Kaiou
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Amazingly well done...you must write more fanfics!
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I was searg thg the net for anything on Elladan and Elrohir since I love the rarely mentioned Rivendell twins. This story caught my eye and I spent a good part of the day glued to the computer reading it. I laughed at all the jesting and humor about as much as I grieved at the end over the turn of situations. The characters are lively and engaging. Might I make a suggestion? How about trying to write a piece like this on one of the Lothlorien elves? Maybe something on one of the brothers of Haldir, Rumil and Orophin. I would be more than happy to read that one! ^_^ Please keep writing!
person FWB
schedule January 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story right from the beginning and I really loved all of it. Although I liked the ending, now that it's over I feel very sad... Which leads me to ask.. will you do a sequel? ^_^
person farewell
schedule January 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just a quick notre before i run off to work: i love this fic, i checked up on each day for updatesloveloved the ending, i'm so happy they got a happy ending. and yay! thranduil and elrond are friends again. hope they can be more soon. would you ever consider writing a prequel or a sequel about elrond and thranduil? the little snippit you gave us was intriguing. once again: great fic, and good luck on your future prospects!