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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh that was a great ending, so glad you returned to the story. and all i can say is: sivan, only you can end a story with a cliff hanger and make me happy! hopefully, that means you are planning more!
ers,ers,
erobey
ers,ers,
erobey
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for putting those words at the end.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh,why can't hings work out with Legolas and Elrond right now?I want them to be happy.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh good Legolas is all well and now we get the answer to why he went out alone. Well we do in the next chapter. giggle
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh he blames himself for his mothers death and one more thing. Well he seems to be a very sensitive elf after all. giggle
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good just wish you hadn't finished there. me need more
huggs
louise
huggs
louise
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, so glad to see another chapter and find out what legolas was thinking! thanks for another great chapter, looking forward to more!
cheers,
erobey
cheers,
erobey
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sivan! i love this story! i love the suspence, but it is KILLING me!
PLEASE lets legolas tell elrond why he did it! PLEASE update soon!
love the story!
cheers, erobey
PLEASE lets legolas tell elrond why he did it! PLEASE update soon!
love the story!
cheers, erobey
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While the premise that you create has potential, this story falls way short of the mark. You relie to much on dialougue that only confuses the reader in trying to figure out who is speaking. You need to more fully re the the thoughts and feelings of your characters. Someone is happy then then suddenly pensive, why? You jump from one concept to another without letting the story evolve. I reads more like an outline than a story.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic! Can't wait to see how it ends!!!