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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My, she's a fickle thing. From Elrond to Faramir in a blink.
I do think you did admirably with your challenge, though. I like how you captured Elrond's sorrow, and how the tone, while with him, was bittersweet, with a finality to it. Yet when she does run into Faramir, the tone turns slightly hopeful. I think it was an excellent place to end it as well, even if Eowyn does come across as fickle.
Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!