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by Silverdragons

person Google
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well. Strange story. nice theme, good written stuff. pretty strange plot, why the hell has orlando to rape a girl to prove he's a pretty 'bad' guy? wouldn't it be enough if he goes aroung drinking, swerin' and gettin' laid by serval men? well. Your story, your plot. just not very woman-friendly.

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person NinielGreenleaf
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow....that was great and very interesting. But knows Orlando, what he did there?