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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read the entire fic for the first time and loved it - it totally sweet and sexy at the same time. Leggy meeting Orlando is such a cool idea. Hope you have more planned for this pair.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great read as always, bring on the next chapter!
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is this meant to be funny? Because it really is. I had to stop reading after the chapter where Orlando's house is broken into. I just couldn't take any more.
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you all like it :D
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's not a bad story. The idea is very original and rather fun (although you've run in to too many cliches for my liking).
Your writing is definately coming along. I suggest you try to be a little more descriptive of certain situations.
Good luck!
Your writing is definately coming along. I suggest you try to be a little more descriptive of certain situations.
Good luck!
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY! I'm hooked on it and it must continue. Maybe you could do a raping or orli cheating on legolas or the opposite. Just keep writing.
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thnx for the help considering the "encore''
but however i do meant you taste and not you are, since Orli was tasting his body so i leave that how it is, i apreciate u tried to help though :)
but however i do meant you taste and not you are, since Orli was tasting his body so i leave that how it is, i apreciate u tried to help though :)
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi !
I enjoy your fic.
May I help you ? I am French girl.
For more, it's "encore" and no "plus"... encore (again) is the correct word for that...
you taste so good, hum, your french is not correct... and we don't say it... you taste so delicious... so in french... tu es délicieux (you are delicious)....
Bye
Li Pre
I enjoy your fic.
May I help you ? I am French girl.
For more, it's "encore" and no "plus"... encore (again) is the correct word for that...
you taste so good, hum, your french is not correct... and we don't say it... you taste so delicious... so in french... tu es délicieux (you are delicious)....
Bye
Li Pre