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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awe, I really liked this story of yours! The plot’s great and the character portrayal were too, as well as the character portrayal and interaction, of course, very realistic. Everything was very well written, apart from a few typos here and there, maybe you could fix them, just a tip! The smut was amazing though, very steamy, Legolas being the aggressor, wow, I’ve never read a story before in which he’s on top, I liked it, even though I prefer Aragorn being top and Legolas botton, (sad but true), eh! Oh, well…never mind! Everything about this wonderful story was hauntingly beautiful, kudos! The ending was very fitting but, of course, extremely sad, oh, well; let them have their hope and so shall we, laughs! Thanks for sharing!
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you are definitely proving that decent A/L writing does, indeed, exist.
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More more more!!! I want more! Say he choses Legolas! I will seriously hunt you down if he doesn't! I don't care about Arwen, they were married because of Elrond's deception! It wasn't really true love!!! Hurry with more soon!!
-Daughter of the Midnight Moon
-Daughter of the Midnight Moon
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I just hope you don't plan on Legolas' mother's prophosy coming true... Because that would seriously kill me... not just Legolas!
-daughterofthemidnightmoon
-daughterofthemidnightmoon
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! this is going to be really sad isn't it? Great I love angst.
Nicely written and reads like it will be a keeper. Can't wait for more. giggle
Nicely written and reads like it will be a keeper. Can't wait for more. giggle
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!! More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very cool story line and characterisas ;)s ;)
louise
louise
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You write very well, and I love the mix of Legolas having sacrificed nobly, yet now he's reached his limits. Er, is the, "Trystan", from, "Tristan and Isolde" (various spellings, though I also thought that it was Tristan who was made to forget)? Anyway, I enjoy your story and look forward more!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho great chapter and ya have to wonder if aragorn will remember. man this is turning out to be a good fic and can't wait to see what comes next.
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have never been fond of the L/A pairings. I have seen your fic on one o gro groups, but did not stop to read it. Yet, today, something in its title called to me and I read the the first chapter. I have just finished the second one and I think it would be unfair not to leave a review to that one. It is beautifully written and I like the way you described a hopeless Legolas. It is very realistic... Very moving. I am the first surprised to say that, but I really liked it.
Well done.
Cas
Well done.
Cas
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is some great writing! I love the detail, and the plot is good too. I can't wait to read the rest of it! Keep up the good work!