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Of course i was right! heheh... listen to me! *smacks own face* sorry bout that.

So... with that teaser i'm wondering... mayhap Corn orn isn't exactly his father-father, but his mother-father? Then who would be the father? Elrond or somebody else?

I so do not like that Seri-guy *forgot how it was spelled!* Can't tell what he's after just yet. But i'm hoping to find out or figure it out soon.

Great chapter, Nem!

*gently nudges ArchNemesis...where she is chained to the table leg of my dg tag table* hehehe that was very good...and yes, I had already guessed the nature of Haldir's ancestry, but I was waiting to see how you unfolded THAT plot twist......beautifully done..with just the right amount of gravity and yet still retaining an amusement that tickles my fancy. Keep it coming, plot monkey! :)

Well actually I was thinking this very plot bunny when I read the last two chapters. It was the only way this would work out happily. That or a law found in a dusty old book. So you went with parentage. I am g I I think that the movie Haldir walked like royalty anyway.
I loved Seregon with a bloody bruised nose. I wish someone would shoot him with an arrow. And Elrond is there. Good we have the set up for a really nice confrontation. giggle

great chapter. can't wait to read more. please continue soon.

cool, me sure liked that ;) wish longer as usual, lol. can't put it down. very good entrabce

huggs
louise_oblique

*walks over to ArchNemesis...pulls out a chair....sits down, crossing one ankle over the other* So....write any good chapters lately? Oh--wait...let me answer that one for ya...YES! Now...*taps finger on table top* Where are the other 49 I requested? Progress! We need progress! If we put 50 of you at 50 tables with 50 PC's...oh wait.....wrong all wrong...sorry...plot monkeys? lol I'm honoured that you placed my review at the head of your last chapter...YAY..I'm published! wait...does that count? hhmm prolly not, huh? Oh well...I'll leave the fan fic publishing to you then...ahem...hint hint...*cough cough more cough cough*

ARGH!!!!!! Hurry up and write faster. I am really loving your fic, unfortuantely, I caught up with you. I wanna know what happens next. Please, update soon. PLEASE!!!! I want to know Haldir's secret.
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Prince Seregon needs a very swift smack down the cretin. And Haldir gave it to him. My hero. Swoon. Oh good his nose is broken. Couldn't have happened to a better elf. Of course this isn't the end of this little mess. Seregon will be back to cause major trouble. Someone has to now that Thranduil has come to his senses.
Elladan is going to have a life changing moment. I love those and you have lots of them in your stories so far.
Celeborn and the princess. That was a nice scene. She wants to marry for love. Sweet of her. I hope she has the guts to stand up to her brother. He seems to be out for the highest he can get status wise. The mirror knows. More secrets.
Living as husband and spouse. Does someone have to draw them a picture? OOH that sounds good. Only if we get to see it also.
Elrond detects "something" about those babies. More secrets and some heavy avoidance here.
Ah they didn't need a picture. Good for them.
Elrond is free from his bonding with Celebrian. More tangling of this web you are weaving for them. Oh I made a pun and didn't even know it. Elrond/weaving get it? I hope so or I will feel really stupid.
Bonding rings. That is so sweeIt iIt is time since the babies are kicking up a storm. Can't avoid the subject any longer.
Lovely ending. They so need to be together and we love to read about it happening. Grin. Thank you for the nice scene. giggle

I can't take it anymore! Please, please, please. I'm begging for mercy. Write the next chapter...quick, quick, quick. :):)

Take Care,
Teri

Well, I've just sat here and read all that you've done so far....and here's my take on it.....in the beginning, I was a bit confuzzled, but, liking your style immensely, I stuck with it and slowly but surely, things are unraveling.....you are a master at multi-plot twists......and the ever hateful cliffhanger *grins* All in all, although I understand trying to write with small children being the main focus of your time ( I myself have a near 5 yr old and a 1 yr old) I think you need to ditch the kids at thetersters, and pump out about 50 more chapters, all at once...hehehehe......cause I'm loving it so far.