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for Never without you

by ArchNemesis

person HHS
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm such an idiot.I just realized that Legolas was going to have triplets.The Valar took his daughter.But why her?Soon please.
person Haldir's Heart & Soul
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you remember me.Thanks to you,I can read my stories again in AFF.At least you story is updated.
person Angelfire
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story myDear. please more...
person HHS
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When???Please???
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nemesis!

Yes, I'm finally over at adultfanfiction.net. I decided it was time to spread my wings. Anyway, I had a butchers at your story as requested and I am intrigued. The plot sounds sounds promising after just one chapter, but it was hard to read due to grammar and tense mix ups which lead to confusion. It *is* good but I suggest a beta so that you cull as many reviwers as possible. I would offer but I have four beta jobs (two stories for you and two for another person) plus writing and stuyding going on at the moment!

Again nice beginning, but not really my thing. I'm not a Haldir/Legolas fan so a story focusing on them is not my fancy, but who cares? Write away! This is your story and your pairing!

Pregnant Legolas. *Grin* Niiiccceee.

Love,

Jadwiga
person HHS
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Second son is Elrohir right?Isn't he married already?
person HHS
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One guess as to why Legolas is not gaining the right weight.
person Susan
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, let me beta your next chapter. susanthebeta@yahoo.com
person HHS
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Soooo,when are you going to be able to update this?Please?
person Legolas
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man this story just keyou you on the edge of your seat. i can not wait to see what happens next. If you could please e-mail me when you get this story updated. I do hope you keep up the good work. As for who his lover is i dont ahve a clue. I think one thing but everytime i think i got it figured out you do something that makes me change my mind. I do hope you update soon and i hope to hear form yuo soon.



Peace