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for Alliances Under Siege

by Soar

person Kitty
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two new chapters! :-))

Oh, to call Legolas "concubine" - I would have seen Aragorn's face!! It's near a miracle he had not slain Grotahn!
Anyway, I mistrust this chieftain deeply ... can't wait to know how this will continue! And who has poisoned poor Elessarion! And now Orcs ... what will come next?

This sequel is as promising as the first - I love your storys so much! Hope you can update soon - I just can't get enough!
person Kel
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hullo. I'm back again! Did you miss me? -__- Hehe...

Anyway, let's get down to business.

I can't wait to find out who was involved in trying to poison cutie Elessarion. How dare he/she/they?! Grr!

Hmm... Celdarion's suspicious of Lord Fenner... Hmm... He always did seem kind of strange to me... *raises eyebrow*

Oh, and those men! The Hrotaki, and Grotahn, don't like them... Nope. Don't like 'em at all. *glares at imaginary men*

Oh, and I must say, thanks so much for the lemon scenes you write! They're the best. You manage to make them sexy, passionate, romantic, and detailed enough, but not overboard as to make them perverted and sick. ^_^ I command you for that. I know it's tough to make a good lemon scene.

I wanted to ask, will there be m-preg ins sts story too? Just wonderin'... ^_^ (You probably have the story completely written already, but just in case, I'd think it'd be cool if there was m-preg here too. ^_^).

But hey, it's your story, and either way, I'll keep on reading 'cause you write well, and your stories are always good. ^_^

Okay, I better go now. I think I've babbled enough, and bored you to death more than allowed. *pouts*

Kudos, Kel

(p.s. Whoops... Guess I had more to say... If you can, please try and update sooner, because you write so good, that if it was possible, we'd want you to post the whole story in one day! lol. That's how good you are. ^_^ So if possible, update really, really soon. ^_^ *Smoochies & huggles*).
person giggle
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter of Alliances Under Siege and chased down your first Alliance story. Had to read it through thoroughly before I could appreciate this one.
I loved it! I thought Aragorn and Legolas were very sweet. Also L having to be rescued every time he turned around. L really needs to get a grip but then if he did we wouldn't get A being all manly and protective.
I really like Elassarion's personality, even if he is a little young to have one. I am really looking forward to more trouble in the Royal house of Gondor. this will be a fun ride.
Thanks for all your hard work. giggle
person Anita
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I believe "Chieftain Grotahn" is about to see a less kinglier side of Aragorn!
person Brin
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be very sweet if a romance between Celdarion
and Lord Fenner were to happen, after all an Elf should not
have to live without love. And they both have earned a bit of
happiness, why not have them find it in each others arms?
I loved the first story, read all 30 chapters at one sitting and
this one looks to be just as interesting & entertaining. So ...
More please!
person Kitty
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Soar, you're back :-))) I have looked for the Alliances sequel so long and nearly given up the hope!

Legolas as a healer? This will be interesting! Oh, I can't wait for more and hope, you will update soon! I have liked "'Alliances" so much and I'm sure, it will be the same now with the sequel!
person Vuaryn
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is too great of a fic to resist. I can feel that it was Aragorn that came to his rescue. I like the way you write your fiction. Your ideas are always fresh and wonderful. I really admire your stuff. Update soon, I can't wait.
person Nina
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Who could want to kill the little prince? And this man does not seem a good one.
person Mawgy
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! I just LOVE it when Aragorn comes to the rescue! And, god, batrely on the scene for two minutes and already I hate that cheiftan guy! I bet it was he who poisoned poor Elessarion. You know, to bargain higher with Aragorn so the man can get the ingredients needed to save his son's life while the chief asks for just about everything he possibly can, playing on how much Estel wants to save his son's life! Good thing Leggy can now heal though! HA! His plans were spoiled!

Anyway, please continue, I'm loving this fic!

Luv Mawgy
person silvertoekee
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey great start for a new sequel and glad that you started writing it. hmm so legolas can heal now and ya gotta wonder what else he can do. whelp can't wait for the next chapter.