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for Alliances Under Siege

by Soar

person Mystkyten
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO!!!! NOT THE WARRIOR BRAIDS!!!! And then Aragorn said he liked the new style. SMACK!!! He lived with elves most of his life, he should know better. He better apoligize to Legolas and it better be good :)

I love this story and I am really getting into it ;) As you can probably tell. Can't wait for the updates. :)

person giggle
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah the old barefoot and pregnant ploy. Naughty Aragorn, he might not be too happy with what he gets out of this little problem he has with authority. I realize it is based on love buttingting and getting are many times two different things.
Now just think if L gets kidnapped while preggers, ooh what machinations, lust angst.gst. What a fun ride this could be.
I liked very much the touch about the braids. Yes I have read it elsewhere but I think it is praise of another's thoughts and ideas to use one of their plot devices. I hope the other author feels the same way.
I have no problem with being kept in the dark. It is much more fun that way. A slow unveiling of the plot is like a dance of the seven veils. Much more interesting and I know of what I speak. No I watched I didn't dance. Get your minds out of the my gutter and pay attention to the one in Gondor, thank you very much.
Thank you for the update and I look forward to much more. giggle
person Kel
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw... That was so heartbreaking. :o( I'm sad. Poor Legolas... People really need to be careful about what they say... Look at what everyone's words did to our poor beloved Elf! :o( Oh, I don't know... I have a bad feeling about the pregnancy... It was forced... I have a bad feeling about it all... Oh well, I'll keep reading and see what happens... You're such an amazing writer. That line where you wrote '... a tear escaped his closed eyes...' (or something to that effect, ^_^), that was so heartbreakingly beautiful. *sniffle tear* Okey-doke. Gots to go now. Excellent work as always, darling. Kudos!
person louise_oblique
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOooooooooooooooo that was indeed fantastic. Poor poor legolas, he's going to be miserable. Brilliant fic, hope L and A will got all sorted out. Why do I get the feeling that L's new braids may have a deeper meaning? Kind of like chatel, female, submissive one or something? Not something a warrior would want. God A needs to get a clue! Can't wait for next chapter! Fantastic!

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person Talia
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sd Ard Aragorn. *cuts his testicles off*

You're such an ass to Legolas...don't forget that he is *male*, a *warrior*, and a trillion times stronger than *you!* Quit treating him like a pansy >_<
person red autumn
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter showed much matureness. You are ready my friend to become a famous writer.



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person Vuaryn
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great decision there Soar. Do keep us in the dark, it will be more exciting to read your fic. This is always the fun thing about your stories....you always keep us on our toes, guessing all the time. Excellent chapter yet again...and I hope that the two will get back together....and I want to hear more about their little boy!!
person pris
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
as usual this last chapter is wonderful, i really love this series. i love that it is difficult being a man and elf and the differences causes tension and that love is grand but it's not easy. so wonderful the "reality" of this series. i can not wait for more! keep up the GREAT work.
person giggle
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor L. Just an elf in a gilded cage. Well the first year of marriage is always rough but it seems as if these two have lots of things to work out still. Besides, of course, all the angst and drama you are going to inflict on them.
Ink tnk this is such a sweet tale of young love, even if they aren't exactly young to us. Nice details of the orc battle without being too gruesome. I guess L showed those barbarians he isn't just a pretty face. This may not turn out to be such a good thing thought. giggle
person Vuaryn
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, Soar! You've updated again, two chapters. Yay!!! Boy, they made out on chapter 3. Ahem, wonder if the Prince Consort is going to have another again...or it's too soon? *wishful thinking*. I can't wait for everyone to come to Gondor and figure the mystery out. Bottomline, I love the fic and the way you write. Update soon, Soar, you rock!!!