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I like it. Legolas is very cute, and very dashing, and if I ever, ever somehow get sucked into Middle Earth, I will jump him and man-rape him!!!! I swear I will too....

oh yeah, Please update for me. But here's a little constructie critism, break you long paragraphs into shorter ones, and write the voc. seperately.

I/E:

Are Legolas steadilly aimed his long bow, he felt a sudden surge of guilt. Was it truly his place to kill these people?

" I can not be responsible for masacre," he said to his companions, turning the bow on them, " And I will not let you be either."

Then blah, blah, blah, whatever happens next.

It makes it easier to read and understand.

Update!

Bye!

very good so far, can't wait for what comes up next!!

Allo there, I just wanted to tell you that this is absolutely awesome so far and that you should start updating soon or you shall feel the wrath of Marbles!!! Buahahaha!!!

Anyways, I'm particularly interested about how and why the orcs picked up the girl. I mean, why would orcs care about... well... she probably was a child when she was picked up so... why would they even care about a human child? That strikes me as odd... -_-

Well, hopefully you will be inspired to write another chapter of this, because I'm addicted!! Update soon!

This is really origianl idea and you're axictuin bri brilliantly,pl ease write more soon.
Rose

Interesting start. loving with orcs ?????????//// EWWWWWWWWWW
Vi

very good, please write more :)

More more more! Curious about something: how can she be a human with orc parents???

Wonderful chapter so far.

Please update soon. It was very good chapter.

Please hurry up...please...

You have to keep going with the story. I want to know how she came to be raised by orcs. What is her background. Please, continue.

Duuude! This story rocked. Please continue with the story. I reviewed. :)