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by twopoint

person Jay
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thankful you are continuing this story. Your words are beautiful...like music to the ears.
person padawan_jinx
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I read this story awhile back and the site locked up on me and wouldnt let me review, so I'm hoping it will allow me now. This is one of the most absolutely enthralling fics I have ever read. The descriptions are just wonderful and the emotions.... I mean, you REALLY hit them right on! Its so great to see a tale of Glorfindel that ISNT slash or slash related. The fics that truely capture what Tolkien endeavored to create are few and far between and I must say, you nail the true essense of the story and the characters.

Awaiting more~

PJ
person Emmica
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good.
The flow, the words, the feeling one gets from reading this somehow make for the most beautiful experience I've had in ages.
(And I love angst.)
Good! Got anymore coming?
person Fiona Rayne
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...wow.

That is probably the most beautiful, lyrical and moving love scene/story I have ever read. This review will have to be a short one as I'm going to be late for class otherwise, but I can safely say that is the definitive Elven Lovemaking. If Tolkien had written smut, that's how he'd have written it. You are a very talented writer and this story was beautiful, there's no othord ord to describe it.

Looking forward to more writing from you (and feel free to e-mail me anytime.)
person Elenya
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A nice story. Very sweet and well written. The description of the first kiss was breathtaking...maybe you could consider writing something longer? I would love to read more!:)
person EmilyS
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a rare find! This story was marvelous - I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you'll be writing more stories'll'll be watching for your name.
person Nikki
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely and very nicely done. :)
person Iamme
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly awesome!!
person mirasaui
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, nice work!