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for The Arms of Comfort

by Murron

person sivan325

schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM

First, you paste the story twice.

Seccond. It was beautiful.

I love what I read.

Sivan

person Kirameki

schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM

I loved it. It was so touching. Especially the beginning. I hope you write more stories like this. |^_^|

person ertu

schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Nice, and well-written compared to the majority. The story was simple and I prefer more character interaction, maybe even dwell more on romance (as long as it's not an MS or fangirl fantasy OC) , but you did project the mood well, and I could appreciate the characters' voices. I'd like to see you tackle a more in-depth and longer story, if you're of the mind.

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