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by linweseregon

person Vi Janaway
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has been such a good story
it is nice to see it come along so well
person Orcagurl
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a story.
It's still not done, I understand and I can't wait for more. Heck, this is AFF and I expected smut, I didn't get any and I'm still hooked. If you knew how dirty I was you'd understand what a big compliment that is.

The whole Celebrian thing is sing ing to confuse me......but I think that's the point. Is she? Is he nuts?(probably) Keep updating your chapters please! I need more! I need more!
person mirasaui
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aiya, I hope the brothers do not take what Elrond says to heart! How painful it must be to see such a wise lord spew such madness. Hope the poison works its way out of his system soon, or they can find a way to temporarily take Vilya from him. Look forward to more!
person Dana
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story just love it write more soon and when i say soon i mean asap
like right now
person Mirasaui
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still with you here. Nice to see the kids bathed and well-fed. Elrond looks as if he will make it and all will end well. Look forward to the next update.
person Mirwen
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really did enjoy reading your story up to your latesest chapter. I hope you update soon.
person Mirasaui
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks like a happy ending if the Elves can save Lord Elrond. Great chapter! Look forward to more.
person Mirasaui
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Elrond has been found by his family. I would imagine "the squatters" will now find a new home. Love the story, thanks for sharing.
person mystkyten
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story!! Can not wait to read more. Would love to see interaction between kids and Lord Elrond. Lord Elrond is my favorite character. He takes care of everyone, now it is time for them to take care of him.
person Mirasaui
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So now Joel and Eyomn have rescued Elrond. Mum's pulled him into the cave and is trying to doctor his hurt's as best she can, and Elrond is so dazed he think's she's Celan. an. Not too mention, the human family is squatting on the edge of Imladris, scared of being discovered by the Elves, not realizing that it's the Lord of the Realm under their care. Just keeps getting better--look forward to more!

Mirasaui