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for The Gift

by mirasaui

person elf_pixie
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to say that I'm enjoying this story very much. I love the personalities of the characters,Haldir is a riot! I also love the Lindir/Glorfindel pairing, though any Glorfindel pairing I'm partial to!

Thanks, keep writing more!
elf_pixie
person EAlhswith of Skye
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. You write very well. Keep up the good work and please update soon. I love your story.
person Mawgy
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! Oh, just when Glorfindel and Lindir have each other, Glorf goes and gets himself into, quite possibly, a deadly situation! Stupid elf! Now, I know you're not gonna let him get hurt, (right? RIGHT?) but that won't stop me worrying. I mean, Tebring lost a leg and is fading, you won't give Glorfindel the same fate, wyou?you?

Hehe, I liked the part of the cook almost putting Haldir in her lardar. Course, I'd put him in my bed.... but, everyone's different, I suppose.

Anyway, please update soon, I just HAVE to find out what happens to Glorf. So loving this fic.

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAH! Oh, that was just TOO beautiful for words! So hot and sexy, yet sweet and loving. And Lindir comparing Glorfindel to a mountain predator was just wonderful! I laughed when imagining Glorfindel pouncing on a piece of material like a cat would a mouse. It's not osmething everyone would write about, I give it two thumbs up, both for originality and humour.

Sorry I haven't reviewed for ages, uni work has increased since I'm coming up tam pam period. I'll try to do better from now on.

And, thanks for reviewing my fic, it's much appreciated.

Just one thought. Now that Lindir and Glorfindel are Lovers and no doubt spend the rest of their lives together (and probably even after then too), has Lindir ANY idea as to what he should get Glorfindel?

And, I'm starting to wonder, who did Glorfindel get? Is it possible he got Lindir's name? That would be so good if he did!

Anyway, can't wait for the next update, plase let it be soon.

Luv Mawgy
person Ealhswith of Skye
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Why do you guys insist on cliffhangers? Hurry up and update. I want to know what happens. Seriously though, your fic rocks! Keep up the good work and update soon.
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I was in tears when I read how Lindir's parents died. That was so utterly sad; I can see why he hates humans. It was well written. I am so glad that Glorfindel and Lindir have confessed thier feelings for each other. This is an awsome fic and I can hardly wait for the next update.
person Anita
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I am going to throw a party for the Starlady!

This chapter was really beautiful. Your description of all that happened was so detailed, I could see it in my mind. I am going to throw you a party as well, for having written a very important part of the story so well :)
person Brin
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is so enchanting and you are killing me, LOL.
Umm ... More please ... soon!
person Teri
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally, the air is cleared between Glorfindel and Lindir. I wonder how Lindir will react when he bathes with Glorfindel and Haldir. I am dying to find out what Lindir will choose for Glorfindel's gift...an object or a feeling. This story really has me going. You're a very good writer. May I say, that it is wonderful to read a story that does not drip with improper grammar and misspelled words. You have a keen eye and sharp focus for writing this story. I also like the detail you put into your descriptions of the preparation for the swordfighting and archery contests. Please continue with this story. I noticed you are only working on this story. I hope you will continue to work on many more stories.
Take Care,
Teri
person Teri
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just can't get enough of this story. Glorfindel is so thick headed. You weave a wonderful story.
Take Care,
Teri