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by HPDM4ever

person kit
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like it. You actually have a plot which is a rare and greatly appreciated thing. I hope you finish
person Lady of Legolas
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you don't mind me deciding to read the rest of this story on this site instead of FF.BTW.BTW,I'm still miffed at Legolas fookinoking at another elf.I really thought that he feels something for Haldir.I guess we'll have to wait and if if Legolas will "cheat" on Haldir,or give their blossoming relationship a chance to grow.
person Niere
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please keep up the good work. Your characters are well defined, each is an individual person rather than a cardboard cutout. I really like the way you have created the dynamic between the Mirkwood Royal children.

I look forward to reading more soon.

BTW-You are evil! That ciffie was just plain crue
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person Aly
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are evil to leave us there!!! And you better not leave us there for a couple of chapters! Although I am interested in what's going on with Thranduil. I can't wait to read more.
person Celathiel
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, don't give me heart failure like that! I just read all the chapters and got to the AN. I really hope you continue this story, it's fascinating! Though Thranduil is clearly out of his mind if he thinks the other elven rulers are going to let him keep behaving like this. I hope Legolas finds some happiness, or at least peace of mind.
person mirasaui
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see the Mirkwood siblings heading to Lorthlorien, although it seems they are in for a bit of trouble! And now Haldir is jealous of a certain Elf who is attracted to Legolas. From said Elf's reaction to Haldir's words, Haldir might ought to watch out. Love the story, look forward to more.
person Breach Cannon all must die!
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
evil cliff hannger
person Ealhswith of Skye
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was cruel of you to stop there. However, please tell me the Haldir and Legolas get together in the end. I love your story and was thrilled to see and update tonight. Keep up the good work and update soon.
person Gilraen
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOO!!!! Is that Haldir there? Poor guy...elf... he kind of knew Legolas for way longer and then some1 to take him away...

I really want more and beg you update soon!! :)
person Aly
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now you have to find a more free time so you can keep writing!! Especially after leaving us with so many questions unanswered. Who was that at the end? (I'm guessing Haldir) Wha goi going to happen with the twins and Glorfindel in Mirkwood (or on their way there)? What's going on with Legolas' siblings? Have they left yet? When will they get to Lothlorien (if they do)? So hurry up and write more! :)