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person AVARIELLE
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'TIS ME AGAIN.HO IS SCHOOL AND HOW DO YOU FARE.WELL ANYWAY VERY GOOD AND I PRAY, UPDATE AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN.



NAMARIE
~AVARIELLE~
person louise_oblique
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yep short again, buried under uni work ;)
yes i liked this chapter too *grins* actually i loved it ;) a fabulas story, cerborn very good and legolas just lovely. wondering what chaos will insue now the twins are here:). i really liked the father son relationship btw

huggs
louise
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep, much easier to read. Thanks! I'm very intrigued by this story. I can't wait to see how it turns out.
person HHS
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It explains who Haldir's sire is but,what about Rumil and Orophin?Who is their sire?
person breach cannon all must die
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I like what Glorfindel was hinting at
person HHS
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What took you?!Anyway,thanks for explaining to me as to why I was seeing less chapters on FF.net.Yeah,I don't think that Thranduil will stay out of their lovelife.Would any father would when it concerns their child?But in his case,it's all for selfish reasons and not for Legolas' well-being.
person kirameki
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH I do love this! Especially the Elladin and Elrohir part. Though I do feel sorry for poor 'Glorfy'. I also love the Leg and Hal pairing. Can't wait to read more.
person breach cannon all must die
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gasp Haldir just called Celeborn Ada
person Sarah
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending. Brilliant! I'm still waiting to see the twins again though, and Glorfindel too! And maybe you could manage a scene with Elrond and Erestor? Erestor's always been one of my favorite characters!

luv ya
sarah
person Tracy
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ada?! OMG. I wanna know the story behind this! And that Luimhenn had better leave my Haldir and Legolas alone!!! Update soon!!!!

*TRACY*