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by HPDM4ever

person leann
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no, haldir, don't mess up a good thing! write more write more! i love thtorytory
person louise_oblique
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i did lot's
;)
huggs
louise_oblique
person keri
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more?

i like the way you are building the relationships.
person AzureDragoness
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*does a happy dance* WOO! More, pwease :3
person BizarroButtercup
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! An update :o). Hopefully, Legolas and Haldir will be safe from Thranduil in Lorien.
person louise_oblique
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brilliant

huggs
louise
person HHS
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seems to me that Thranduil will be more of a jerk now that Legolas is in Lothlorien,especially when he finds out about his relationship with Haldir.
person angelgirl
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haldir, I feel so bad for him. He didn't get to have his Ada growing up... sniff sniff..... But Legolas will make it all better.... I really like the how you play the twins... can't wait for more.
person AVARIELLE
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.K. I WAS GOING TO WAIT TILL I HAD FINISHED WHAT YOU HAD WRITTEN.BUT I AM ON CHAPTER NINETEEN.ADA!!!!! OMG.SO GREAT.LOVE IT.AAAAAHHHHH!ADA THAT IS SO CLEVER..GREAT JOB..IS IT O.K. IF...OH NEVER MIND...GOOD STORY..MELLON-NIN(MY FRIEND).I WILL REVIEW AGAIN ON THE LAST CHAPTER.I LOVE IT...


~AVARIELLE~
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quick comment... something is wrong with your codes for chapter 20. It makes it really difficult to read. Thanks!