rate_review Reviews

I still say the straight jacket padded cell and seditive would have been better

Elrond will "torture" him right?

well...i found elrond not really a torture type..............BUT he does teach Thranduil a lesson....and there will be someone else teaching him a lesson hehehehehehehe

So what exactly did Elrond do to Thranduil?

More please!!!

i know it needs improvement, but why i blew her of was because she made it sound like i did everything wrong, at least u tell nicely.
and i really do appreciate it that ppl try to help, but when they say i have a bad grammar that doesn't help me much cause i don't know what is wrong with it, so could you perhaps send me an email with that?

More please...Please.

As soon as possible will be good *smile on my evil face*

Now more please.

I think you mean ROSE PETALS. Great story by the way

oe oe oe thank you soooooooooooooo much

i dont know if anyone noticed but in my first review i was as nice as i could be i never said i did not like the story i do like it its better then alot of other stories, and lovingelves im sorry if i have insulted you and yes i know my grammer sucks to especially when im angry. but i know right from wrong, i know this site was made to be a place to free your imagination which by all means it is, and i myself and only 15 also there is nothing banning usm thm this site!!! and we are gonna figure it out sooner or later why not figure it out sooner by our own devices, know what i mean? im sorry lovingelves if my last two reviews have been harsh the first one was not meant to be i only wanted to help a creative writer trying to express there desire to write about their favorite movie/book i dont blame who can resist writing about the characters!!! its fun to mess around with them, and i know you may have been stusing qeunya for three years but it doesnt mean your the best at it i mean come on i have been doing spanish for three years and im not that good at it, how can you expect yourself to be great in quenya you dont have a teacher....or maybe you do, and i dont want you to blow up in my face like you did the last two times but i agree you need a beta she isnt doing her job, i would be happy to help you find a new beta my friend khai would be more then happy to beta for you she is an awsome grammer person best in her class i swear on the grave of tolkien!!!

Lena please continue your story I DO REALLY LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!