rate_review Reviews

This is one of the very first stories I read when I discovered this fandom months ago and it remains one of my favorites. It is suspenseful, and although it takes great liberties with the characterizations, it's the thing about the story I enjoy the most! Keep writing, it's a great story.

This was an interesting story, with a bit of a twisted plot. Really enjoyed it! ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter lol. o0;

I absolutley love this story!!! Just read all 14 chapters!!! And i have to say you are an awesome writer. I felt like i was actually there! Poor Legolas...*sniff* Go Gimli! Ahh Legolas and Haldir are so cuuuuuute together.

Keep writting!
Nileregwen

More please.

I read the first chapters in The Library of Moria, it was great.

Now I read until chapter 13, and waiting for more.

Update soon...

I think Gimli should step in sometime

I love just love this fanfic! Great work!

I hope you explain in detail why this is that the Mirkwood Elves end up as slaves in your fic

Free the Elves!

Hey! I just finished reading this fic - just stumbled across it this morning, and in a fit of being bad and consequently late for class, I ended up reading it... all of it... (Bad Bu But I have to commend you on a wonderful construction you have underway here. I consider a story to be very good if it causes me to think about it after I've read it - if it troubles my mind, constantly causing it to bubble with little flashes of the magic it created. I have had your story at varying stages of my consciousness all day, never far from my awareness. I consider that to be the mark of true craftsmanship, if a story is so compelling that my mind stews on it for that length of time. I also think that its a sign of a great story when the story causes vivid imagery to play throughout my thoughwhicwhich are not only experienced during the reading, but recalled later as memories, as if the story were actually something I witnessed, like a movie, rather than merely words that were read. So good job, I really enjoyed what you have so far, and love how you've dealt with such a delicate topic so well. As for critism, the thinthing I would like to mention is that you should try to work on maintaining a consistent tense throughout the story. Most of it has been written present tense, but occasionally you bounce between past and future. While you can indicate either, you must do so with the bulk of the focus on the present, in the correct context, for it to work. Just something to pay attention to as you write. (Which is hopefully quickly and in large quantities...) hehe. ; ) Thanks again!!

I dont have time to read it all now, but this story kicks ass! Legolas is the cutest ever.