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by bluegold

person bluegold
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just occured to me to do this *shrug* Thanks everyone for the wonderful reviews and I hope you all will keeo enjoying it.
person kirameki
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Elrond dressed as a queen? Buahahaha. I'd *love* to see *that*. |^_^| And down with Aragorn!
person Tanesa Etaleshya
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed your fic! Please keep writing more as I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter,suo see how Legolas fares with Aragorn- and by the way I hope there are more nasty scenes with him- can't help wanting to see Legolas abused just so that he can come out on top in the end. I think your story is great- I am currently writing my first fic of my own so I hope mine is as good as yours. Maybe I will be able to post some of it soon. Thank you fortingting Bound!
person belle
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your idea is interesting, but in all honesty, i found it very difficult to get through the first chapter. you constantly switch tenses, and your flow seems to be quite irratic and, therefore, makes what you're trying to write, very difficult to follow. i also suggest that you mark this story as AU, for a couple of reasons, one being that the mirkwood elves are obviously not slaves, according to canon, and the other one being that i feel you have written aragorn completely out of character. i might try and get through the rest of this story, because, as i said, i do find the idea interesting and am slightly curious to see where you're taking it, and what you're doing with it.
person chibifae
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love Bound! Aragon is in big trouble now lol! please write more soon!
person Nemesis27
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful fic. I read it last night and up until now, I keep getting flashes and thinking of what happened to poor sweet Legolas. It is sad and I admit I got a bit emotional about it. I think it's because of the way you make Legolas suffer and yet accept what happens to him. He knows it's wrong but has given up the force to fight back. Amazing, I could actually see it before me. You are a very talented writer. I am curious what will happen and and how Aragorn will be punished.

Keep up the good work
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful attention grabbing chapter! Ah that was so sad when Legolas sang for Haldir at Helm's Depp, but adorable! evanescence rox my sox!

Great job!!!!!
Nileregwen
person sivan325
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story, as I started to read it on LOM, and at LIC.

I still love what I read, Poor Legolas, how much he is going to suffer Aragorn's wrath? more please...

Sivan
person breach cannon all must die
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, but if Sheacts like an elfling (i e the tempertantrum) then Celeborn should treat her like one
person kirameki
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story so far! I spent most of the afternoon reading all 14 chapters. |^_^| First off, I don't blame them, who in their right mind could resist Legolas? I know I wouldn't be able too |^_~| He can sing for me anytime. Though I do feel sorry for him. Poor Legolas. He's too kind, gentle and beautiful to be a slave. Honestly. I also love how you did Pippin and the hobbits, it was hilarious and they were so adorable. I think you really captured their personalities. As for Gimli, go Gimli! Stupid men... I never really liked Boromir much, but you made me dislike him even more. And as for Aragorn. The bastard!
You know, your story actually brought tears to my eyes several times. I'm so glad you freed the elves! They deserve it. I can't wait for you to continue it! I hope you do so soon. I eagerly await the next chapter.