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for Beer and Skittles.

by eyebrow

person Anu
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A classic favorite of mine. The sheer reality of it.
person vestalvagrant
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was incredibly human. There's nothing like waking up next to someone you're still keen on the next morning...
Okay, I thought the farting in bed detail was a bit too human!
I loved the line, 'The house rotated with me as an axis'. I'd fall AOT for anyone who could say something like that when hung over. *sigh* But he's gay and I can't have him. *grin*
The emotion in this story was what meade it really memorable, now I'm going to go look for anything else you've written...
person deep
schedule February 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There's something about this that I just love. I think it's the tone and the premis. The last two sections did me in, I think. It just...I dunno, I read it last night and was compelled to review it when I got back on today.